Tim berners Lee

[Kevin]

following on from my previous post i have now added a new page to history of the internet tim berners lee check it out

 

[PC]

You might want to make it read better (i.e. less obvious that you didn't lift most of it verbatim from Wikipedia)...

 

[Kevin]

i did use wiki for research but it isnt the same if u acually read them both

 

[PC]

One sentence as an example...

Wikipedia:

he implemented the first successful communication between an HTTP client and server via the Internet with the help of Robert Cailliau and a young student staff at CERN

Moovin:

He was the first to successfully implement a communication between an HTTP client and server via the internet, with the help from Robert Cailliau and a student from CERN

A couple of word changes


Its a good piece though.

 

[Kevin]

thanks for that advice i have made changes as it does sound similar