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You might want to make it read better (i.e. less obvious that you didn't lift most of it verbatim from Wikipedia)...
 
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One sentence as an example...

Wikipedia:
he implemented the first successful communication between an HTTP client and server via the Internet with the help of Robert Cailliau and a young student staff at CERN
Moovin:
He was the first to successfully implement a communication between an HTTP client and server via the internet, with the help from Robert Cailliau and a student from CERN
A couple of word changes :p


Its a good piece though.
 

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